Wednesday, March 21, 2012
Entry 3 - Draft 1
One of the entries that I found that went against what my ideas were was an article in a magazine. It was saying that it is the teens fault when they have premarital sex and get pregnant. It stated that the teens immersed themselves in that environment and had the full capacity to move away from it and control what they did and didn't do. I disagree with that because the teenagers most of the time live with their parents. They cant afford to live on their own, and therefor are stuck in whatever environment their parents or guardians have chosen to live in, whether it be good or bad.
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Through this entry i learned that magazines are trying to give out a bad reputation for having premarital sex and they are trying to pin the blame on the environement that these teens grew up in. I would like to know if the author of that article is biast against premarital sex or if they have ever had a real life experience in dealing with a situation like this. You did a good job of showing where you thought the author was coming from and trying to show their viewpoint on the whole topic. A few sugestions that I would have for you is maybe to give a few more details about the article and maybe even quote the authors own words into the blog.
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